Now that I've read it...

Now that I've reread most of The Nourikonm and The Red Banner, I've realized how badly I've written some of the chapters! This tells me four things:

1. I've got to read everything after I write it, to make sure it is actually good!
2. I need to make "rough drafts" of chapters the day before I release it so I can edit them before I publish the new chapter.
3. I need to make sure I do both those things before I even think about publishing the new chapter.
4. I will need to rewrite most of The Nourikonm until I am satisfied with what I wrote.

So for awhile now I'm going to be editing most of the story, maybe even it's storyline. I'm starting with chapter one, I'm definitely going to need to lengthen the chapter, and add a lot more detail to the characters and settings. I'm not doing this for only The Nourikonm though, I'm going to be doing this with The Red Banner as well.

I promise to not make any posts involving my books unless I finish editing a chapter. I will not make any more excuses as to why I haven't made/edited any chapters, I'm on a mission to stop being so lazy with this blog.


ANYWAYS, I hope to finish editing chapter one in The Nourikonm by tomorrow!